When i did my pitch to the class, I was able to get feedback from the class and teachers. This meant that i could take on board this information and feedback and then hopefully be able to apply it to my upcoming work.
Some of the feedback included:
- How will you manage to fit the whole film into 5minutes?
with the result being that i would have to try to speed up some scenes that were less important but still neccessary to be used.
- why does the psychiatrist kill charlotte?
because they had a past, that ended badly. he wants to get revenge on her!
- How will show why psychiatrist wants to kill her?
I hope to do a shot of the file on his desk that shows his entire plan, therefore converying to the audience the plot of the story!
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